Audience research task planning ( feedback from pitch )

The feedback from my peers was overall good. I had one improvement to do and that is my masthead: they suggested that the masthead colour should be something that matches with the Bollywood music and they think I should think of a different one as it doesn't tell the audience if it was put in the magazine that it's a Bollywood music magazine.Otherwise its good and it was a good presentation. What my audience liked was the idea for my journalism and the examples of the readers that I have shown. My idea for my magazine is creative and exclusive. My audience liked the fact that I want to create a Bollywood music magazine rather than doing hip pop or R&B genre.