My first magazine( not to be marked for )

This is my old magazine, the reason why I did another front cover is because even though my target audience is males and females, its mainly hugely on females. The model of my magazine looks nice as in terms of model but to my opinion its just didn't suit my target audience , it didn't match with the front cover with what the model wore. I want to make my magazine unique and realistic. Plus since the image dominated the whole background it took all the spaces for the other headings. And whenever you look in a magazine especially from a young audience view I wouldn't spend my money on buying it. So thus since I'm an young age audience it looks nice as in the model but to me it looked dull and boring to buy and this will make my audience not to buy it. With my extra research on reading magazines I found out that in front cover the artist image almost matches with the whole cover and therefore I made new front cover.