Wednesday, 29 January 2014

My Evaluation draft

1.       Following the Bollywood magazine conventions I believe my magazine has overall followed the conventions of a Bollywood magazine. Firstly my front cover matches with the codes and conventions for e.g. from my case studies of the first magazine that I analyzed  as you can see the front cover is mainly covered with the female artist only  and there only few sell lines/teasers.  And underneath is the masthead; on the whole the magazine captures audience attention because first it’s a famous notable artist and the way the magazine is layout is: there are few teasers and the use of anchorage (the title) is short, catchy and effective at the same time. The skyline ‘collector’s issue” is goes over the top of her head suggesting that it’s much more important than her. Therefore the whole magazine purpose is on the masthead since its front of the artist as it’s big, bold and upper case letters are used to make stand out. The strap line is under the anchorage text (title) again it’s encouraging and the use of space out makes it more visible for the audience to see it especially when the text colour is white. IN MY FRONT COVER  I’ve used some conventions and codes those set out by professional magazine but I’ve also subverted as well as developed conventions in constructing the  layout of my front cover and I have maintained this in my contents page and the double page spread. My front cover follows the idea that no matter how important the artist is in the front cover the masthead will be always more important because to me if it’s only about the model then there are thousands magazine out there who have also beautiful/handsome model on their cover and thus what makes my magazine unique is that the masthead is the main essential and it’s not only about the artist but other stories too (cover lines). One way my front cover follows the conventions of a magazine is through the use of masthead : when researching and doing my case studies I’ve noticed that the masthead is always large, bold, catchy title and quite short, plus from the  magazine newsstand distribution task , it was mentioned that no matter which or what popular artist you put in your front cover there’s no guarantee that an audience will defiantly buy it, the anchorage and the masthead are also the huge component for a successful cover. Therefore remembering this tip  I considered that as well as having an attractive model in my cover my anchorage text must be effective and the masthead should be distinctive ( the model  and the masthead should be the Centre of attraction; the masthead should appear first so that the audience knows what the genre the magazine is about). So therefore the element that I have reinforced from my case studies and the essentials element of a professional magazine is the model. Without a compelling image it wouldn’t draw a potential customer’s interest to my magazine while sitting in a midst of thousands of others at a shop. In order to make the image of the model powerful but simple, I’ve used a grey background which is neutral and appeals to both gender but at the same time I wanted the layout to be effective and professional because I wanted each elements to be stand out e.g. the title is clearly visible, bold, bright, formal use of font which shows the magazine is dominant along with the reader is drawn to the striking central image with the bright pink and black anchorage text. The colour theme is also simplistic with having grey and white implying a formality and mature approach as in target audience. This links back to my case studies ideas and the ways my magazine has used and developed forms and convention of music magazine because like all the music magazine I believe that my artist image is strong influential image as a front cover artist because when photographing I made sure that I use simple plain backdrop to make artist plus the anchorage text to pop up to the audience eye by itself. Alternatively when looking at a British music magazine you will see in majority of the magazine the masthead is behind the artist (some magazines like NME or Q are always at the front to show the magazine is successful and dominant in terms of the issue of the magazine. But in British Bollywood magazines sometime they either put the artist behind the masthead or the masthead front of the artist this is because the issues depends how famous or attractive it is about the artist e. g  If it’s a hot spicy issue then the masthead will be on the back of the model.  As a result I choose to have the masthead front of the artist because I didn’t want the artist to look like the main cover star as if it’s only about her because the anchorage text is different (the issue is different) and in keeping the fact my target audience is also on professional people and qualified people even though it’s aimed at young audience. I wanted to give the teasers in the magazine space out to stand out clearly for the audience to notice and more organized since I’ve used formal fonts. On most of the music magazine target audience profile younger audiences are the Centre attention thus they have model with whom they can identify in the front cover. In my magazine I’ve also tried to maintain the interest of young audience ( since its mainly on female audience) but at the same time showing that it’s also aimed at a formal and older audience from 16+ as you can see it in the cover lines. Therefore the masthead is subverted as its front of the artist and the teasers are space out and bold so they can easily be seen. But at the same time the artist is in the Centre of the cover meaning she’s the important curiosity in the cover. The detonation of the whole magazine that I wanted to create in the magazine is that to emphasize that it’s a Bollywood music magazine and usually in any Bollywood magazine they never have all the teasers being stick to it in one place, and they have only few teasers in the cover. So another way I’ve also develop the idea that all the cover lines should be next to each other. I have given more space and made it noticeable to see along with the main anchorage text. When creating my magazine one thing I wanted to depict is the uniqueness and brightness of Bollywood music magazine that it’s more diverse and exceptional in its own way. It does follow the codes & convention of a magazine but also develops and challenges forms of conventions in a magazine. The detonation of my front cover is about a new young star who’s made it top of the Bollywood music industry but at the same time she had some issues  
In my contents page I have tried to maintain the codes and conventions of a real music magazine. I have used double page but however I didn’t use any other images except my model images. Usually in a contents page there’s more than one different artist picture but  In first side I used the mainly the model within in  a grey backdrop with pink subheadings to balance out the feminism idea that it’s only a female target audience it’s also aimed at males audience . By mixing pink and black fonts in the grey background balances out the feministic since it can appeal to masculine too. In the feature section I’ve outlined the lead articles as you can see the lead articles are brief, snappy and there is a short explanatory giving the reader more choice whether to read or not this is because the text being justified is one of the common conventions of magazines. The most striking difference in my contents page is that it’s only the same model pictures being shown more than once not to show that the general focus should only be on her but I wanted to accentuate the fact in this content page there is more than another issues to read and it gives the audience more easy choice; it almost lures the audience to read about it more as there’s isn’t anything particular highlighted to read “especially/must”.  Rather than having images with number I decided to have numbers separately in a square box. As my magazine colours were based pink and black, using these two colours again would give a feeling of elegance, formal, sophistication, bold, confident and create a classy mood especially as it’s for qualified and professional middle class as in social group audience. Therefore I believe my contents page gives those feelings and moods that I wanted to reflect on it.  Furthermore in terms of house style the contents page keeps to the usual codes and convention as it uses the same colours as the rest of the magazine but alternatively I haven’t use similar fonts since to keep the feministic sentiment  however not to over emphasize that it’s only targeted into female audience. Using black and pink fonts forms a sense of mysterious in the content page evoking excitement that what’s so special about the issues/cover lines. So therefore another way my magazine developed and challenged the convention that all magazines font styles is different when it comes to contents page typography because in my last case studies inside the contents page there was no image it was structured and outlined together without no space to make sure that not only it grabs audience attention but to keep them lured into it as if they have to read the whole contents to see which one they should read about.  As a result since my target audience mainly starts from 16 + and young adult onwards I have to consider that the layout of the magazine should not perplex the audience as I’m trying to maintain the modernity and formal look instead give them give option to choose what to read. While the magazine audience is mature and young adult the magazine should not contain issues/cover lines that’s seen as not necessary to read. And plus it had no title saying content page instead it gives the audience to look more which  is interesting because it gives a fresh new look of the magazine to read about it. So overall I have tried to reinforce, develop but tried to subvert the codes and convention because I wanted to demonstrate my uniqueness in my contents page for e. g. I have placed the title contents page at the top of the page so it’s easily to access for the readership to see and the word BOLLY Rhythm shorten as BR appears first before the contents name, this illustrates the importance the magazine has especially in Bollywood plus it’s only about Bollywood music.

Double page spread: The first magazine that I have analyzed is a Bollywood music magazine aimed at female audience. In this magazine “Filmfare” the double page spread only used white backdrop and placed the images of the artist. It used pull quotes, there was no particular effects that makes it look bright and vibrant. But the magazine did it in a simple effectual way as along with the texts the images are also given more attention to read. The image almost empathize the story in the page. Furthermore, there’s a big capital letter A  (drop capital) at the start of the first paragraph and then in the next page there’s a big capital letter W after the 3rd paragraph. In both of the pages there’s more text than images and that’s to keep the audience hook so they don’t turn the page without finishing the reading. Surprisingly there’s so masthead at the start to tell what’s it’s about; this idea sharply grabs audience curiosity to know more about the story plus since it’s a beautiful famous actress it amplifies  the curiosity of a reader  specially if it’s about her achievement.  With the image there’s background information on what’s the image is about, it straight tells the audience where and how the images links with the text. At the front of the page since there’s no masthead to introduce the topic, the images almost introduce what it is going to be about as we can see her old images being shown. The research from this magazine  ,has challenged and developed the codes and conventions in different and similar ways as in order to keep the interest of female audience the magazine has to give or introduce or change the convention in order to make it look interesting but most importantly to make sure the audience doesn’t buys another  magazine. In contrast the double page spread in my magazine similarly follows the conventions set from my case study magazine for e. g  In the double page spread you can see two pull quotes but however in order to hook  and sustain audience interest I made it shorter  and also I wrote in pink and black , the use of pick and black for the pull quotes shows the artist strength and symbolism for her femininity as the story mainly talks about how she doesn’t spent her time worrying what people say about her, which again shows her mentally strong . Additionally, I’ve used a different font because to show as if she wrote it by herself and creates a different meaning to read it as if it’s from a diary of someone, this font keeps the page more neat and tidy which gives the pull quotes more to stand out. Therefore I have reinforced the element pull quotes as it gives an audience an inside of the artist world life and what they think etc.  As well as I have noticed that most music magazines have something different splash in the front for the real story and then in the double page spread they have another masthead/ title/ splash, this is because it tells the next part of the headline and thus in my magazine the headline in bright bold formal modern pink and black colour gives the audience an insight as to what the interview is going to be about. The use of image shows the type of genre , this is can be seen by the costume of my role model, I have only used two images but also in the other page rather than having the image taking over the whole space I have edited downwards because in the story the model wants to portray that she doesn’t want Bollywood music industry to dominate her life and her choice of music , hence putting the image down in the right side makes it more easier to read the text; this links with the idea that the model also wants to free herself and give herself more time rather than carrying on only with music  in her life. There’s a big drop capital letter “I” in the title to surprise the audience about her and since it’s really bold, formal, big it symbolizes her identity as in the front cover the artist name is already given “you think you know Fahmi think again”. The drop letter “I” link with the image as it shows the seriousness in her face which clarifies what she wants to say. I haven’t spread out the headlines in the double page because this is where I wanted to challenge the codes and convention as when an interview takes up a double page, they allow the title to bleed onto the other page in order to show the reader the pages are linked; I haven’t followed this element because I wanted to imply something varied rather than having spread it out not because of the amount of texts but to emphasize that it’s a Bollywood music magazine and Bollywood music magazine can challenge and develop  its own codes and conventions ( but same as British music magazine ) and that is what my magazine is about , If I follow the same conventions there’s not going to be not much profit for me as a publisher because there are thousand music magazine out there and to make my magazine stand out I have outperform some of the codes and conventions . Nevertheless magazines also tend to use a striking image of the singer to catch the audience attention or they will place more than one icon in a different place or in different pose in a different way. This is because the types of pictures being used are a metaphor about how the artist is and how she is in real life linking with the text. As a result I have also tried to use a striking image and that is created within the costume dress pink with pink scarf, the effect been created through these icons is that it holds the audience attention especially it’s a bright colour highlighting she’s an Bollywood singer. The use of costume of the artist pink represents her confidence as a young female singer, the respect that she deserves and preserves, her assurance as being both British and Bollywood female singer, her maturity at such young age even though some people see her negative way( what people think about her ). Plus the colour pink shows how her relaxation and how happy and mentally strong she is even though ignoring what people say about her, it almost reveals her tension that she lets go as you can see a smiley happy face in a chair, meaning that at the end her choice reflects who she is, as the artist is a young British singer and a Bollywood singer the pink represents her passion for her music because of the colour brightness, youthful and sensations. The atmosphere that is created in this double page is about how she deals with people without being aggressive and how she deals with calmly. So therefore I have reinforced the element that a double page cover story should almost explore about the artist lifestyles along with telling the story, it should more reflect on them.
Yet, however I haven’t used the stand first where underneath the headlines there’s a short explanation to tell the article summarization. Using this convention  I believe almost blocks the space to read, it chunks up everything in one space, which I didn’t want to as the long story I haven’t highlighted the questions but I left it so the  audience would want to know more if they read what’s it already going to be about. Besides I haven’t change the style of writing frequently thought out the text, the text has only few little questions, the page numbers aren’t in the bottom corner of the page because I have wrote the page number on the contents page, and to keep my audience hooked into it I infer that it would be better to have the main cover story only in the contents page. Lastly the whole house style has used pink and black that is initially to match with the artist, it links with the title, the use of big bold black font for the title symbolizes that she’s British Asian singer and the pink shows her Bollywood side. The combination of these two colors characterizes her feeling of strength (her music talent) and shows her seeking appreciation as she tells us in the story. So overall I have followed some codes and conventions but I have also developed and challenged some codes such the page numbers and so on, although I have reinforced the element of quotes/pull quotes in the magazine.
How does your media product represent particular social groups?
As my magazine falls on the genre of Bollywood music magazine I have aimed to create a social group for my target audience. When developing my magazine my purpose was to create the magazine aimed at Asian ethnicity as its Bollywood only.  The social group that I wanted to denote is professional and qualified people/women and it’s mainly directed on them. However the age range starts from 16+ onwards this is because from my extra audience research the conclusion that I have found is that majority of Asian young girls and teenagers love Bollywood especially about the music that come from within the Bollywood movie. My target audience is defined in terms of occupation, age, gender and ethnicity. Furthermore in mainstream Bollywood magazine females are depicted in a sexual or undignified way. Hence as my magazine is mainly aimed at professional and qualified women as it’s a female music magazine, I infer it would be better to have better and respectable representation of women for instance IN MY FRONT COVER you can see a young talented restless  girl who’s ambitious is to become a better singer not to become a famous singer, the  whole idea for her to be in this cover is that it shows the seriousness ,struggle ,fame ,hard work ,passion and love of a singer towards their Bollywood music career. This BOLLY R magazine talks about how the modern music starts are dealing with their life what issues they have faced and what are their future just like all these issues are discussed in a MOVIE magazine. This magazine signifies the importance of the Bollywood female and male singers, without their beautiful tune voice a Bollywood movies are imperfect. This magazine reflects the life of normal musicians but it talks more than about their life, it has more elements of Bollywood music rather than the artist. The BOLLY R magazine is linked with big start IMA award and the Global Indian Music Academy Awards (is the global recognition platform dedicated ... and musicians in India, also known as The Chevrolet Star GIMA Awards. famous noble award). These two are the current famous awards for Bollywood musicians. BOLLY R magazine gives the audience the chance to vote for their favourite artists and if their artist is chosen for that award they get a personal letter from that artist. The BOLLY R magazine offers more than about an artist, even if it’s aimed at females audience it can also be for males too as many males have their chosen male artist too. My magazine represents modern musicians and the uniqueness that’s created within the Bollywood music. The messages and values that are attached to the representation of my magazine is that I challenged the idea that all females star should be shown in a way that attracts both gender but however not every star does Bollywood movies everyone has their own famousness and distinctive, and thus in my magazine the exceptionality of my model is that she’s a young Muslim British artist but at the same a Bollywood singer as well. She a young girl who’s fighting with the stereotype that Muslim people aren’t seen in music industry as they never was. The reason why I have implied her in that certain way is to show that not everything is everything has its meaning and differentness. My front cover implies her in the simplistic and effective way, this representation of her I believe is a positive outcome of new fresh comer’s musicians. It gives the reader a role model who they can look up to especially for young British Muslim or any Asian. Most importantly my magazine challenges the stereotype the idea that a magazine also have the element of entertainment; yes my magazine also has the element of entertainment but its magazine that aims to create aspiration, hope, success , entertainment of the world of BOLLY music, love , celebration etc. for the audience at the end of the day. This magazine portrays everyone in the same way with the same respect. It’s fresh, new, modern view about the old life of Bollywood music, its magazine of mysterious music magazine where the more you read the more you want to find out about Bollywood Music. The representation of my readers are positive as it’s also signifies for eligible, proficient and educated people.  In terms of stereotype I have challenged the view that anyone can be a musician and they don’t have to be famous to make their music famous, a singer can be famous but it doesn’t mean that your music will also be good and better as you are, therefore that’s what my model conveys that even though she’s young she doesn’t need the public to admire her but to listen to her music .The reason it’s aimed at professional and qualified people is because from my audience research Bollywood music magazine is escapism, entertainment, hopeful magazine where you can enjoy and learn that applies to you real life issues and problems, it’s almost a leisure hobby for these readership from their world of work but however it also a magazine that also follows the modern trend in more diverse way and sticks with its formalness for e.g. in my double page I’ve tried to maintain the elegance, formal, dramatic and sophistication feeling in the cover and that’s is through the use of language I used which is in formal tone . The magazine has its audience review which you can see form the contents page review section: this is where the audience can write their feedback about our magazine and what they think we should include more or add. To describe my target audience I would say “young, affluent, educated and diverse” and one of my respondent described my magazine “it’s for someone who wants to feel young again, feel the Bollywood music thrill in their life which they all used to experience before their marriage”. BOLLY R magazine is a magazine of high brand value and integrity. BOLLY R is the destination for the world’s most popular BOLLYWOOD MUSIC industry: music charts, news, videos, reviews, events + more, bold stories, big interviews, and astute commentary. They are all conveyed with energy, passion, irreverence and a point of view that defines its audience. BOLLY R is the magazine that brings music alive. It draws together the biggest Bollywood stars, the most exhilarating phenomena.




1.       What kind of media institution might distribute your media product and why?
The media distribution that will distribute and publish my magazine is the world most famous magazine distributer and successful Is Conde Nast. Conde nest is considered to be the originator of the “class publication,” a type of magazine. Its magazines focus on a wide range of subjects, including travel, food, home, culture, and other interests, with fashion. The company brand identity is as you can see is its specialty on class and they don’t have a mainstream audience. This company has one of the highest publication and successful magazines and therefore I believe that the uniqueness of my magazine matches the convention of the organization. My magazine offers an exclusive different Bollywood music, it’s the destination for the world’s most popular Bollywood music chart, reviews, events etc. It’s a first British music magazine covering both Brit Asian and Bollywood singers. The branding of my magazine is that “it’s a magazine that offers an inside of the Bollywood world of music, BOLLYWOOD music brings a rhythm and sensation towards your music magazine, and it’s a magazine where the taste of music can make you feel young and vibrant. It’s a magazine aimed at middle class and high class but particularly aimed at qualified and professional people who want to re- experience they atmosphere of Bollywood music. Bollywood music can be for anyone, its new aspirational different genre of music and the more you read it they more addicted you get to read the next issue”. This can be evident from my audience research as the audience they are from higher class and middle class, I have halved it equally so it doesn’t create any issues in my research. As a result the branding of my magazine links to the organization of Conde Nast because it follows the idea of class identity since my magazine is aimed at higher and middle class. And the magazines from their company has their age range start from young audience. Even though Conde Nast is an originator of lifestyle magazine and only focuses on particular class, I believe it’s not about the target audience that makes your magazine buy more but about the contents and the issues it has because magazines like vogue and GQ offer more than lifestyle. Similarly my magazine offers more than music but it stays within the genre of music, it includes the topics that are excited and unique especially in terms of class audience contents. It is different from their existing magazine this is because all their magazine focuses on niche ideas/ topics like GQ. Hence my magazines doesn’t only focuses on niche ideas but at the same time gives out something different to read about as it’s a Bollywood music magazine. My magazine stand for its uniqueness, creativity for its news, sensational music and lastly for the diverse that it brings; even though the audience is on Asian people it can also be white people who want to experience the world of music more and different genre of music. Bollywood music is a fascinating music genre that hooks people more and more as they read along. And in Conde Nast all these is what makes their magazine stand out from the other magazines in the market. Conde Nast magazine has always something exceptional and proposes an exceptional wide range of subjects. BOLLY R also particularly proposes the same idea and that is BOLLYWOOD MUSIC MAGAZINE not only talks about music but the whole entertaining world of BOLLYWOOD music. My magazine therefore gives them the chance to increase their company uniqueness and it stands out than the other magazines because it’s a first Bollywood music magazine. I infer my magazine will bring the sensation that are bring by their magazine. And it could lead to a successful in the market if the company sees the magazine in a positive way. CONDE Nast magazines are about creativity and uniqueness and that’s where my magazine follows introducing its creativity of music within the world of Bollywood music and the exclusivity in its Bollywood music, it will create more diverse with the audience bringing every Indian culture together. Overall my magazine is strong in creating identity for itself. The brand and identity of BOLLY R should be widely known in UK as that’s what I’m expecting from the company and when it’s more successful in the market I want also in America and other countries for further achievement of the magazine. I believe the use of intriguing images, font styles, bright colours and stylish layout helps to make the magazine visually stimulating and captivating to read ; this is can be evidence from the audience research for my final magazine outlook. As that will give BOLLY R its reputation for being the best Bollywood music magazine since it’s one of the most significant element for successful magazine.
One of my respondent has said “I found the writing style very influential; the main article is similar to documentary especially with quotes. It’s so colorful that you can almost understand the feelings of the model- they detail every piece of information even if it’s not that much texts. To make it more informative for the reader. But at the end it combines fun and interesting commentary for the purpose of making it more suitable for the different age audience”.
1.       Who would be the audience for your media product?
The audience for my magazine mainly is from 16+ onwards aiming at high class to middle class only. I would like my magazine to appeal to the ABC demographics due to the quality of my magazine as it will be monthly. As it’s a Bollywood music magazine, it is stated that this genre is more popular with females than males. For instance in here you can see what do I wanted to illustrate through ABC audience.
Demographics are key to the creation of a magazine. This system allows journalists and editors to create a specific target audience within that demographic. Demographics arrange people into six categories or classes. It is said that everybody fits into this Social Class system (above), which ideally places people based on their occupation and wealth. This is also key to the creation of the magazine as it allows the editors to choose the price and quality of the magazine based on the class they have chosen. For example: Vogue won’t be aimed towards people of a lower class as it is expensive at £4.10 and the quality of the magazine proves this. My magazine is actually for those who truly enjoy music magazine and Bollywood especially, if you are a lover of music and different kinds of music entertain you then BOLLY R is your magazine (this is for non-Asian people who might consider to buy) Keep up to date with all the happenings in the world of music. With top class photographs, reviews, interviews and features, every issue of the magazine is a treat for music lovers. It’s also for 30 age range people because my magazine is also more of a generation since it represents older generation by displaying older famous Indian artist. But at the same time targeted for those who are interested in Bollywood music or into the world of Bollywood, plus the iconic music that was around. The general ideology of my magazine revolves around respect for the history of BOLLYWOOD music and features iconic artist.





THE MISSION OF BOLLY Rhythm
BOLLY R is an educator, a living archive and a trusted source of musical excellence, providing its audience with an authentic, independent, and emotional connection to the music. BOLLY R is loved by its readers, the music industry, and by musicians alike, because it engages them on the subject they love the most
THE BOLLY READER
NINA is 27, a passionate and discerning music fan, long-time musician himself and dedicated record collector. With her high disposable income, she loves nothing more than sneaking off to the local independent record store to see what’s in. A heavy gig goer, she also likes festival experience, having begun to outgrow Birmingham festive. NINA and her partner occasionally like to unwind at the weekend by packing the toddlers off to their grandparents and inviting their friends around for dinner, party and a rifle through her record collection to unearth some hidden gems. Well-read and media-savvy, they chat into the small hours about music, books and films.
Readers of BOLLY R magazine are completely gripped with BOLLYWOOD music therefore the Magazine sells well among students as they are associated typically associated with loving music and partying. Also, this fits well as the median age of an NME reader is 30 years old. This means the magazine is popular with the younger generation.
They love technology in general (mobiles, watching films) which is helpful as younger readers are often influenced by factors such as social networking sites and peers. This is evident as readers typically want to impress their friends/peers and often buy magazines such as this to fit with the trend, which is shown at the top of the media pack with brands such as H&M, Topman and Mark spencer being associated with the magazine.
Malika is 20rs old and lives in Leeds. She is a passionate music fan, as a girl she got into ‘proper music’ in the olden classic bolly music. She’s in full-time employment but reveling in life without any dependents or family responsibilities. Malika has high disposable income to spend on himself alone, being a heavy consumer of music, buying up to 6 albums per month. She loves reading BOLLY R to discover new music, as well as filling in the gaps in her back catalogue. Mark is highly savvy to digital technology, a keen social networker and uses online Services to enhance his social life. She’ll regularly welcome her mates round for a warm-up big night out. An open-minded experience seeker, Malika loves the live music experience, opting to go for a mixture of gigs, especially huge arena shows. Though a hugely passionate music fan, this is not to the detriment of his other interests – film, gaming, shopping, fashion, TV and comedy.

As you can see the age range starts from 16 to 30 but it continues as for many music is always the same no matter what your age is. The location will be on mainly in London, Manchester, Birmingham, Cardiff, Glasgow, Edinburgh, Tower hamlet, Newham, Oldham, Luton, Redbridge, Barking and Dagenham, Hackney, Enfield, Bradford, Westminster, Leicester, Harrow, Hounslow, Wolverhampston, Preston, Sandwell, Slough, Rouchdale, Nottingham, Cambridge, and Bristol. These are the main locations that I want to supply in. The social class is higher and middle class. The ethnicities are Bengalis, Pakistanis, Indians, Africans (South Africans), white people (40 % I would expect as some people taste for music genre change every 10 yrs.). In terms of How do I know is because from my extra audience research, my feedback for my ideal magazine and my final magazine commentary illustrates that it’s mainly on British Asians and Africa’s because first of all Bollywood music birth is in India and many south Africa n people understand the life of Bollywood as in the past many black people either moved from India and lived in there for a few years. This can be evident as I interviewed some of black friends and many of them watch and Listen to Bollywood music and movies. The audience feedback from my extra research have proposed that they would like to read a Bollywood music magazine because there’s always a movie magazine but not a music magazine in fact rather than the movie the music’s are what really catches people attention for a good movie since majority believe if the music is a good quality product then the movie should also be worth watching because with good musicians are with good directors. Without the positive feedback from my audience I wouldn’t have started the magazine this is because I thought that no one would be interested to buy Bollywood music magazine. Surprisingly I got an opposite feedback implying it would be a mazing if there was also a Bollywood music magazine. With my first audience study I forwarded my idea and planned to make a music magazine. I didn’t want to make a hip pop, R&B or pop magazine; I want to stand out as in my uniqueness and I wanted to apply my creativity because I always wanted to make Bollywood music magazine since young girls and myself love reading  about Bollywood music , there will be always about the actress or actor stories but no one wants to hear about the musicians work, they issues, their life, with all these It motivated me to make a Bollywood magazine as Bollywood music has its own identity than the whole Bollywood movies etc. Moreover the 2nd investigation was on showing the audience the ideal/plan of my magazine: 10 girls and 10 boys were my participants randomly but they all were Asians but some were black. To conclude the audience overall liked my magazine idea and the overall house style of it. They said it would look creative but half of them suggested me to use bright colours that connote feminism but also a modern colour for both gender. Therefore I decided to use pink and black because pink and black make a great combination symbolizing BOLLY R. lastly my final commentary which you can see in my blog is really positive and good comments demonstrating that my magazine follows the codes and convention of a real magazine and it does represent that it’s for British people except the some of the headings in my content page are bit cluttered to read; this is small issue but as a contents page it’s been given positive feedback and less negatives. I can’t have everything perfect because it takes time to understand audience view and to match the magazine with the audience view. One of the feedback is from my peer who said she would like to buy my magazine even though her taste is in pop magazine because of the creativity of my magazine and its genre.



1.       How did you attract/address your audience?
Again refer to specific feedback gained.  Which specific elements attract or address your audience? For example do elements of mise-en-scene reflect the audience? Or are your models aspirational?  What sort of language targets your audience? Give specific quotations.  Think of use of slang, lexis, 3rd versus 1st person, sense of community and ownership.  Do uses of fonts, colour schemes and layouts address your audience? How.

First of all before starting my magazine I did my own research on what makes a magazine successful. So thus from my own exploration I followed the route that makes your magazine stand out in the market and for the audience representing the genre. All the feedbacks from all the comments reinforces that BOLLY R magazine clearly signifies Bollywood music genre. I have tried to the codes and conventions for a typical music magazine but also at the same time tried to develop and challenge some of the elements, in order to present my creativity and the uniqueness of my magazine. 


The masthead: The masthead is in pink and black which quickly attracts the audience especially females. It short, snappy and easy to recognise. Big Bold masthead as the colours are effective .But simple and it stands out a lot stands out a lot because of its simplicity and font style. It’s placed front of the model implying the magazine is more important; as well as the model it’s also other cover lines that are momentous to read at the same time. The onomatopoeia/ metaphor connotes the style of font: brightness and diverse of Bollywood and its music. Its stands out well in the neutral background. From an audience perspective I would say you can almost feel the shine that it’s a Bollywood music magazine. Both colours are equally use to symbolise that it can be male for as well.
The cover lines (main tag lines on the cover): The cover lines are short and creative/ almost grasp your attention such as the big number 916 hooks the reader eye to the magazine as its big and bold, as the font are posh stylish language; this links to my target audience for higher class as higher class citizens associate themselves art and different types of music. The number it is an art for the musicians as it’s a special number. The other cover lines are placed in different direction with a lot more space to stand out, this is effective and visible as it saves a lot of space but yet is still very noticeable. There are cover lines in the top right hand corner of the front cover which, like the main cover line, keep the same colour consistency to make the writing recognisable and make the viewer’s relate them colours to the. The main cover line has the artist name more perceptible and outstanding than the other tag lines. The anchorage text starts with a curious question about the model. The middle two words are highlighted bold and bigger to make exemplify it’s the main strap line. Its eye catching with the words being separated a bit. Plus the main cover line is keeping a consistent house style with the colours of the words; pink and black are the main as for the artist name to stand out black colour is used as its eye catching especially the name of the artist can be recognised.
Puff/skylines: (give information about content in the magazine) using this puff enables the audience to understand that it’s aimed at female audience since it starts with an interesting teasers. And reading this almost gives a feel of confidence that it must be something important because it relates to our personal identity such as tips on how to not care what people say about your choice of music, demonstrating that this is something in which you should read it. The puff is the central identity of the magazine, along with the masthead the puff gives clue which music genre the magazine is going to be about. In addition the puff resembles with the main cover line artist because both of the strong colour is pink, connotating that she’s also one of them who are confident in changing their own world.
Main central image: From my peer review I have found the same results that the model is the main attention of the magazine that grabs audience attraction towards it especially when it’s a girl with a hijab, following both old and modern trend that it doesn’t matter who the model or how out exposed they are, its mainly the cover line story that hooks the audience. Even if an audience buys it with a beautiful sexy musicians but the cover line isn’t that interested later reading it, it will be a waste of money this could put off people for not buying it next time. The costume is a simple pink dress with black tights symbolizing that she’s a young girl, representing our type of music and her choice as an individual. All the teasers aren’t squashed with the model since in mainstream music magazine it’s all either squashed together/ the model dominates the magazine by taking up the whole space/ few teasers not recognizable. I infer by doing this technique, gives all the cover lines stand out and easy to read at the same time. This makes it easier for the reader understanding what the magazine is going to be about such as for new comers.  However the strap line isn’t close or either separated from the model since all the colours in the cover is same. The main cover line font style is formal but I have made the artist name and the main word “know” bigger, outstretching the idea with the image. There isn’t any other images because this is where I have used the following codes and convention: it’s better to keep one simple image to dominated and introduce the magazine. Too much colours and images confuses the reader about the purpose of the magazine. It creates a fascinating effect along with all the teasers, not because of the colour but because I have used a simple neutral background to keep the audience attract and to make everything stand out clearly reflecting and reinforcing that it is a Bollywood music magazine. The artist positive smile with glow in her face outlining that not it’s her time to shine and her time to be famous. The image creates an atmosphere of peace, sensation feeling of rhythm and the warmness associated with it.
Overall I would say the main component that addressed my target audience is the model as she’s Muslim musician and the fact that she’s a young singer with ambitious hopes. The masthead also fills the atmosphere in the cover implying the brightness of the Bollywood music magazine since it makes it easier to understand the genre of the magazine. Everything is in same colour matching it to outstand that it’s also for mature and higher class audience since it gives a clue reading the teasers. The reason why I used the same colours everywhere is because firstly my magazine is a Bollywood music magazine, secondly it’s aimed at mature professional, qualified and lovers of music and thirdly it’s a magazine where it opens the world of all types of Bollywood musicians ranging from young to old.  It’s more about music but within the context of music. For example the first cover line is really visible because of its boldness and the reason why I didn’t place the masthead in the middle is because I want the audience to look at the model as I wanted to make sure the along with the model the masthead should be attracted at the same time.
 
 In terms of addressing my audience I infer that it’s better to stick with my own identity of my magazine, meaning magazines such as mojo or Q have a lot of information in their content page and that’s their brand identity reinforcing their identity of their magazine. My magazine is simple yet effective especially addressing the target audience. I have tried to maintain the codes and conventions but at the same time made sure that the elements attract my audience such as the masthead is the logo of my magazine and I have designed the font in the same colour but with a different textual design like to show the formalness of the magazine. Above as you can see a list of elements that I have used and I have outlines the specific conventions that attracts my audience. For e.g. in my final feedback the issues that have been put in my magazine are quite sensational and the use font symbolizes as if its modern magazine aimed at higher class. Certainly this is what I aimed for and my participants have almost agreed with me. The main elements that kept the reader keen on reading the contents page is the  way the image has been laid out( the layout), the use of fonts and the overall layout of my magazine. However one of the disadvantages is that the date is hard to see but in the front cover the date is highlighted big enough to see it.

 ·         The elegant formal typography matches with the artist as with her serious look.
·         The large I highlights her personality as an artist and what she thinks.
·         Pink is extremely bold and signifies passion and confidence which connotes the artist passion for her music and confidence towards her.
·           The heading is much more interesting, bigger, eye catching signifying her loudness that she doesn’t care.
·         Drop capital letter is used in the masthead only to symbolize who she is.
·         The layout of the page is quite in a modernism and fashionable standard of having the main images taking less space while having the text on the page to keep the attention. This allows the large main image to attract the reader’s attention, drawing them into reading the rest of the feature. The idea that i wanted to emphasize here is that it’s a Bollywood music magazine not Q or billboard magazine.
·         There’s pink and black with a touch of half white and light grey background. The colour schemes help to keep up with the novelty and sophistication sentiment along feminism.
·         Rather than having texts or too much images all over it removes the purpose of the magazine as the magazine aims to provide the knowledge and information that the target audience will want to know. Most importantly remembering the audience the magazine aimed at, the layout of the magazine should look like a professional magazine aiming towards middle and higher class. Moreover  the use of colours does attract young audience as from my own research on colour illustrates that pink and black is a famous modern colour attracting  young adult and teens.
·         There are number of ways the ideology of BOLLY R could be interpreted. Principally the ideology is to inform the readers about the world of Bollywood music and what is happening around. It also endeavor to promote and new artist or the current musicians in the mainstream Bollywood industry. Reading the magazine it has been said that Bolly R aims to educate its reader on music of times past such as the model in this cover is a young artist who doesn’t care what people say about her but does care about her music only not her appearance.
·         The article itself has used simple font in terms of typography. I have used serif fonts to keep the authoritative and powerful mood within the journalism. For the masthead decorative typeface to keep the elegant and prestigious atmosphere.
·         Images are kept within the same distance bring it closer. The images are simple and graceful as the intention of the article was about how the artist struggled in her time. Additionally the images bring a dramatic presence to the article creating an impression of authoritative and strong emotion activating the feminine into the artist and into the female audience. The connotation indicating the artist almost is seeking respect, appreciation and admiration without asking the audience. This matches to my audience requirements as the artist should an individual whom the audience can embrace.
·         There are more texts this is because it’s a story about her life and presenting with too much colour distracts the audience. It keeps it neat and professional.
·         Pull quotes indicate what the artist’s feels and this type the font is different because I wanted to portray as if the artist wrote it by herself, it gives an impression that it’s a quotes from diary.
Overall the I believe that the codes and convention matches with the audience attraction such as the aspect of mise-en-scene reflects the audience as the artists is dressed in a simple nice way since middle class identity  are reflected through their simple stylish clothe. The grey neutral background reveals her identity as young girl trying to make her music famous, indicating she’s not from a famous background but from an ordinary girl trying to achieve her dream regardless of what people say about her .In terms of journalism I haven’t used any slags, I have used formal typography, keeping it plain and maintaining the purpose of the magazine, who and what it’s about.



The technologies that I have used have benefited me by making the overall layout of my magazine professionalism. Using technologies such as indesign and Photoshop enabled me to enhance my ideas further my ideas actually because doing a draft is different to doing it real. It’s really creative as you can even explore and combine the different steps in an action. Your knowledge and skills will be sharpened with what you will discover. I have tried to look into the steps and ways in creating it. This way, you will know which tool and effect is used to give a good result. After seeing your productivity, you’ll feel like an expert for it will certainly look like the work of an expert. You can amazingly come up with a work with combined techniques, tones and effects. So, even if you are not really that good in photo manipulation, it will seem like you really are with the magical touch of actions. This is what I felt by using Photoshop and it certainly did enhance my skill further because in terms of creativity I really good at it. However using indesign was a bit trouble for me because from my perspective Photoshop enables and makes it easier for me to construct my magazine. In indesign there’s too much editing you need to make which waste your time for e.g. when constructing the content page I found it difficult to place the writings together and create more peace. But at the end I learned properly on how to use it properly and it have a good outcome especially for my double page spread giving the look I want from it. Indesign in terms of handling long passages, multiple pages, subtle manipulation, alternate characters, large sizes, Open-Type fonts, drop caps etc. Such as you have more control over the text and adding. Hence when writing in my double page spread it made easier for me write up neatly. Indesign helped me to expand my skills in developing the style of my writing since it gave the idea of how and what font create certain affects.  I would use Indesign in future if I had to layout a book since it saves an hours of time. Furthermore when I was in the studio DSLR camera creates an amazing effect especially for a simple beautiful photo. By shooting in RAW mode the camera captures more detail, and allows for far more flexibility when it comes to editing photos later on. Digital SLR cameras are usually good at taking a sequence of photos of a moving subject; and will be able to keep re-focussing as the subject moves too. Have a look at the photo below to see the effect. You can capture a moment in the photo. The pictures at the end came really good and it gave me the chance to edit it more effectively.
I wasn’t shooting since I was the model; my assistant loved it when she was taking pictures of me. Because it gave her less stress and she said that now she feels like a good photographer. From her experience it increased her photography skills but it was new skills for her learn. In addition when doing my pitch presentation I decided that prezi is a better technology. This is because Prezi’s unique slick “zooming” function offers an increasingly popular alternative to the traditional PowerPoint presentations. Prezi is an online, Flash-based presentation creator who shares similar functionalities with other information presentation programmes such as Microsoft PowerPoint and Apple Keynotes. It is a visual learning tool which allows you to create maps of texts, images, videos, graphics etc. Prezi creates stunning visual impact. Import pictures, maps and PDFs and use them as a canvas. With the cinematic experience of the zooming function, I felt like I’m transported into a “world” that I have designed myself. With prezi it increases your creativity and thinking. Therefore I believe prezi has made my creative skills boost further. Unfortunately its only limited in using more tools and options you have spent money on it. However prezi enabled me to express my creativity and stretched my thinking outside the box. Before starting our work we uses time toast to outline what we are going to do and time toast is where you can keep up to date what you need to do. Time toast is a great technology to keep track of your work; it creates a timeline event for you. As a result by using time toast has improved my time management but however due to the pressure of work I don’t really open my account every day and therefore because of the time rush it created a little bit problem for me because in my content page and double page spread I have forgotten to put the dates in. But right after that day i started to use time toast again which gave me a better result of my time. So therefore time toast for me improved my time management.
Finally when deciding the most favourite technology i have chosen the blogger; it’s free and offers anyone the ability to manage their own blog without the burden of technicalities. It encouraged me to be active throughout the whole journey. It captures changes in thinking and motivating on your ideas as well as it invites people tom collaborate such as it made it more easy for my audience to give me feedback since its available to anyone who wants to comment on it. Plus blogging makes the whole process of constructing the magazine more formal as i got to feel that I’m the control of the blogger. Plus it’s cost effective, in timing and so on. On the other hand before doing photography i did my extra research on what are the types of effect in a DSLR camera, learned more the shutter, exposure, the layering, motions, the ways of taking the picture etc. So I would say my research came in handy for me as i was able to demonstrate to my assistance on how to use it properly and what are the ways I wanted her to take the pictures. To conclude I have enjoyed using all the technologies and it indeed improved my skills such as timing, creativity and I did also learned some new skills such as being more careful when editing the images and colour skills.




Looking back at the preliminary task I feel I have learned quite a lot in the progression from it to the full product. I have defiantly improved and meet my action points but you can’t be always perfect at everything as I have bit minor issues but it benefitted me a lot. In my college magazine the overall feedback wasn’t as good and from my point of view I didn’t liked the layout of the magazine. I was confused on how to create it since it was a college magazine. But with this small error it gave a greater outlook of my final music magazine. For e. g. The front cover to me didn’t reflect that it was a college magazine but the music magazine of my cover looks like a proper Bollywood music magazine. In terms of implying where I have learned something new or not I would say I’m already experienced in using Photoshop and for the first time I have actually liked using indesign because it gave a good layout of my content page and my double page spread. I have used indesign for college contents page and I didn’t like not because I found it hard but I haven’t used it in my own inventive way. So therefore one thing that addressed the action points I made was being more imaginative, unique and artistic when designing it. Another action point was on time management issue which I did address but due to the pressure of the work and designing my ideas took my most of the time. But I did improve on it such as I tried to meet every deadline of all the tasks. In referring back to task for I infer this time my improvements and my extra research has increased my productivity of my work in a further better way. When looking at my magazine my audience addresses my magazine as unique and professional magazine. It made me do more research on it and therefore it has benefited this time meeting the action points that I set for myself. In addition I have learned a lot as I said about music magazine, its institutions, and the fascinating world of music especially on BOLLYWOOD music. I have really enjoyed doing my magazine and it’s a great way to learn and get involve more about the world of music magazine.

What technique will I use to answer each of my question?
Well I will use prezi, slideshare, powtoon,mindmester and powerpoint. For Q1 and 6 I would use slideshare as I have lot of information which will break it for me more easily, using slideshare creates more of an creative way to understand and answering the questions. For Q7 and 3   prezi will me much better in presenting this is because since there less writing I also want to add a bit of inventiveness in my writing and slideshare enables me to break it, as it allows everyone to see I can also add external feedback, it’s an simple presentation technology making it engaging with the audience at the same, it makes it more entertaining and different way to interpretate the presentation. Q5 is powtoon as I want to make it visually interesting for the interesting, since this is along question answer, using powtoon will keep the audience hooked to presentation, such as powtoon has an audio speaker to make sure the audience are being attracted towards the powtoon. With Q2 I would use prezi  in terms of representing the data’s and charts information  i will try to use it in a different way this is because prezi can make it simpler to undertsand for the audience and Q4 I would use mindmeister this is because rather than doing a presentaion or with images it will confuse my audience, I decided its better to imply my answer through a poster to make it look  like a set of answers that it is exciting to read.